I washed your dark curls of hair in a sink.
You did not know, I hope you never do
And that is why the water ran with ink;
Perhaps my mind will wash the image too.
You were unaware that I had found you
With naked wreaths of hair, unbuttoned shirt,
And a smile, a simple smile, bathed in blue;
You were beautiful, but the sight still hurt.
I could only gasp in shock and avert
Eyes from the horror of that lovely scene.
That I would find this picture might assert
Some cruelty in fate’s two-fingered machine.
With a lover’s care, with pain and dismay
I caressed your hair, washing it away.



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November 14, 2009 at 2:38 am
Zohra
This is stunning – and eerie – all at once. Many years ago I was walking through an exhibit of “Islamic Art/ifacts” in the Freer Gallery in DC and came upon a five century old pen box (“qalamdan” in Persian) that was engraved with calligraphy that reads:
“when I tested the ink, I remembered your black tresses”
The line was attributed to Sh. Kamal Sabzavar (I think) and it hit me so hard that I wrote in on the first, fresh page of a notebook. As soon as I started reading your poem I ran to find the old notebook. There is something haunting about hair imagery and your poem here captures that in a unique way – one that will stay with me for some time. Beautiful, mash’Allah.
November 19, 2009 at 10:52 am
Dalal Jebril
MashAllah, I very very much enjoyed reading this one I had to go back and read it again. It is very heartfelt and anyone can really relate to it.
Thank you for sharing